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I Rocked Myself To Death by ~23Jester23:icon23Jester23:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Horror & Macabre > Fixed


I want to scream
To stick a knife in my mouth
Slice my tongue off
Cut all the pain out

But it's impossible
This is something unbearable
That I have to live with
No matter how horrible

I need a hammer
To knock out my teeth
I want to wrench out the agony
And leave it, red, on the sheet

I hate all the suffering
I want suicide
But I can't have it
I can't even die

I taste the blood
I'm so close
But I can never reach the grave
It's a fate I'll never know

I take up the knife
It goes down my throat with ease
I feel it touch my heart
And it begins to bleed

It'll never stop
I'll cough up my own blood
And do it again
To find my hard work undone
©2009 ~23Jester23
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Author's Comments

Holy smeg, a poem O-O I haven't written one of these in ages. I finally got an idea, so I wrote it, and I've been wanting to use that title FOREVER.

Got the idea from the bleeding sore on my tongue. Inspiration :dummy:

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~CxTrish Nov 1, 2009, 7:34:21 AM
Amazing dude!

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~23Jester23 Nov 1, 2009, 12:04:30 PM
Thanks so much! :D

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Whoa, look at that bastard rat! He's makin' fun of you!
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Mood: Fear ~wacomman Nov 1, 2009, 5:55:03 PM
i shrieked a little bit when i read this
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*miss-tempest Nov 2, 2009, 3:03:14 PM
:rose: You've been featured here: [link]

MissTempest xox

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~23Jester23 Nov 2, 2009, 5:39:22 PM
Thanks :D

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Whoa, look at that bastard rat! He's makin' fun of you!
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~23Jester23 Nov 2, 2009, 5:42:29 PM
Holy smeg! :omfg: Really? Thank you so much!

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Whoa, look at that bastard rat! He's makin' fun of you!
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*miss-tempest Nov 2, 2009, 6:13:42 PM
Ahahaha yes really!!! You're a great writer, your work is amongst a few others that really stood out for me! :D

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~23Jester23 Nov 2, 2009, 6:28:16 PM
Dang, thanks, homeslice! :meow:

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Whoa, look at that bastard rat! He's makin' fun of you!
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*miss-tempest Nov 2, 2009, 6:29:48 PM
:D

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